Hunting(HELP!!!!!!!!!)

[Riverpaw]

*is hunting in a deep part of the forest,sees a rabbit,stalks it then pounces and kills it*well that was good for a first try*burries it then stalks a water vole and pounces then kills it,the burries it*well better keep hunting*is busy hunting when a fox jumps out and tackles her*

Fox:*tackles her and bites at her neck but misses,then bites her neck and when i go limp he bites my back leg hard and i yowl as loud as i can*

me:*the fox bites my neck and i go limp,then he bites my back leg hard and i yowl as loud as i can*

Fox:*hears cats coming and runs away*

Me:*i lay there in a large pool of blood waiting for help*

[Riverpaw]

*i am near the border with shadowclan so i crawl to their camp,and i am gone*

[Autumnleaf]

*heres a scream while herb hunting and runs as fast as can to the scream*